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nicholewithanh ([personal profile] nicholewithanh) wrote2024-07-03 04:31 pm

LJ Idol Week 1: Someone who will love you in all your damaged glory

At first, I thought that Jessica was really smart. She remembered all of our customers’ names at Magic Lantern Toys and if there was a random question that came up, she was always the first to educate us on it due to her time spent researching for her crossword puzzles. She was really good at them. If there was a crossword championship, she would probably win.

She said she used to be a professor in the army and I didn't know what she taught, but she said it with enough confidence that I believed her. Maybe she taught military history or some sort of a class on using psychological warfare in a combat setting. Jessica had a scar on the left side of her face. She said she got it while in service.

I’d started to wonder if Jessica was a compulsive liar.

Not long after, I heard her tell a customer that she got it while climbing a wire fence after destroying the picnic table at the community beach that she lived on because her neighbors had barred her and her family from accessing it. They said it was because she didn’t pay her HOA dues.

I asked her about it during our lunch break. Her scar, that is. Not her HOA.

“Oh, well. I had a scar there before and then I rescarred my scar,” she told me, taking a sip from her Minions mug. “Did you know that when a red-head scars, it’s more likely to develop into a keloid scar? That’s why my face caught on the fence. My scar was raised a bit higher than if you were to have a scar in the same place.”

I touched the bumpy side of my face and was grateful that I wasn’t a redhead. I already had thin lips and a nose that looked like the milky coffee drip falling off the side of Jessica's mug. I didn’t need my acne to develop into keloid scars on top of it all.

I spent half the night looking at different pictures of keloid scars on Google images. They kind of looked like if a giant earthworm was living under your skin. That’s not what I thought Jessica’s face looked like though. Her scar looked more like a crescent moon woven from mahogany thread. When Jessica smiled, the moon stretched out ever so slightly like it was waning. During our shifts together, her scar waxed and waned depending on her mood.

When I came to work the next day, Jessica was stocking these stuffed dragons that had giant purple eyeballs and tongues that stuck out too far. “I used to have one of these, but it was real.”

“You had a dragon?” Of course I didn’t think that she actually had a dragon, but I was shocked that she would even claim that she did. I punched my ID into our POS system and waited for my first customer to arrive while Jessica continued stocking.

“No, not a dragon. Well, kind of. It was a flying lizard. I had three of them.”

Jessica didn't know this because she hadn't asked, but I happened to be somewhat of a lizard enthusiast. In fact, I had applied to three different universities to begin my journey as a herpetologist. A herpetologist is someone who studies reptiles or amphibians. It’s not that other thing that you might be thinking. The first time I told my sister about my career goals she thought that I was going to take over as the woman who gives the STD talks at the high school. She laughed so hard she choked on her own spit. It was because of this that I stopped telling people what I wanted to go to school for.

I was startled from my thoughts by a man with a dark receding hair line and a chin that wobbled when he talked. “That’s impossible.” He set his Lego set on the counter. It was a replica of Notre-Dame with a $300 price tag.

“What’s impossible?” Jessica asked, plopping the last dragon stuffed animal on to the display.

“You can’t own a flying lizard,” the man informed her, taking his credit card out of a weathered black wallet. “It’s illegal. Actually, they only live in forests and they aren’t even domesticated.”

Jessica shrugged, but I could see her face beginning to heat up. Her crescent moon barely showed up against her blotchy red cheeks. “Well, my mom gave them to me for my birthday. I don’t know how or where she got them, but I had them for years.”

“What kind of an enclosure did you have for them?” The man asked, turning to roll his eyes at me. I wished I didn’t have to witness Jessica’s embarrassment.

“I don’t know. It was just a tank.”

“Liar,” the man barked out a laugh. “If you kept them in a normal sized tank, they wouldn’t have survived a month - let alone years. Even zookeepers find it difficult to keep them.”

Everything he said was correct. He knew he was right, I knew he was right, and Jessica knew he was right.

Her face cringed into a smile and her crescent moon was pulled forcibly backwards. “Well, I guess I must have been doing something correctly. Maybe I should be a zookeeper.” She shrugged again, looking manic in her attempt to look like she didn’t care if this man thought she was telling the truth or not. She brushed at her hair, but her movements were too quick. Her fingers fumbled awkwardly and hit a snarl.

“Actually, there’s a new study out showing the reason they haven’t survived that great in captivity is because people give them too much space.” The words fell out of my mouth. I was surprised that the lie came so easily.

If Jessica was surprised, she didn't say it. She just nodded. “It’s because their wings are so fragile. They damage them really easily if they’re given too much space.”

“That’s a lie. You’re both lying.”

“Sir,” I swallowed, bunching my hands into fists at my side and willing my voice to steady itself. “If you keep insulting our staff, I’m going to have to ask you to leave.”

The man looked at his Lego set and then looked from me to Jessica. Finally he sighed and shook his head. “Just ring me up. I don’t have time for this.”

Jessica grinned at me from across the dragons, her face a triumphant eclipse. I decided that I would tell her about my acceptance letter to the University of California as soon as the man cashed out.

I wanted Jessica to be all of the things she thought of herself and I wanted her to think incredible things about me too.
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[personal profile] thephantomq 2024-07-04 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
Interesting that the narrator tripled down on things to help Jessica out / get the guy to go away. He may be right but helping Jessica save face was apparently more important.
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[personal profile] reidharriscooper 2024-07-05 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
These are the kind of lies me and my friends tell for each other when they're obviously lying but fuck the party who isn't in the group infringing. I hear that person has ears so big they are going to fall off.
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[personal profile] fausts_dream 2024-07-05 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
I promise to support your lies if you support mine isn't always the best way to live. But sometimes love just works that way, well done.

[personal profile] tamara_in_jakarta 2024-07-05 05:32 am (UTC)(link)
Loved this!
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[personal profile] murielle 2024-07-05 06:16 am (UTC)(link)
Now that's a conversation I'd like to read.

You've drawn these characters so well I feel I've know them.
Edited 2024-07-05 06:18 (UTC)
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[personal profile] murielle 2024-07-05 09:11 pm (UTC)(link)
You're very welcome!

Never. Sometimes it's the prompt sometimes it's something else. :-)
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[personal profile] yachiru 2024-07-05 04:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent character work here. I love the almost uneasy friendship and how you integrate your details into the story.
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[personal profile] roina_arwen 2024-07-06 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
This was very sweet - I enjoyed the characterizations and the protagonist’s support of Jessica.
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[personal profile] halfshellvenus 2024-07-06 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
I had a scar there before and then I rescarred my scar
Uh-oh. That's a telltale response for a pathological liar.

I loved the twist here, that you decided to back her outrageousness rather than side with the Factinator in calling her bluff!
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[personal profile] winter_time 2024-07-06 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
“Oh, well. I had a scar there before and then I rescarred my scar,” - I actually did try this as a kid (lol I did not make the best choices as a hyperactive 7 year old), so I honestly thought this was non-fiction. So enjoyable to read and the characters felt so real <3
Edited 2024-07-06 16:26 (UTC)
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[personal profile] pixiebelle 2024-07-06 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
This felt so real, I thought it was nonfiction at first. What a fun read! Well done.
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[personal profile] aggienaut 2024-07-07 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
This is the best entry I've read so far (: I really like the moon scar and how it can wax and wane and eclipse
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[personal profile] muchtooarrogant 2024-07-07 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, interesting, I didn't expect your protagonist to back Jessica up.

You have lots of great lines in this piece, but I forced myself to pick one, and landed on, "It’s not that other thing that you might be thinking." LOL

Great job!

Dan
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[personal profile] adoptedwriter 2024-07-07 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Sometimes you do need to back up a colleague/co-worker, even if they are full of crap. Cute story! Fun read!
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[personal profile] static_abyss 2024-07-08 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
My siblings and I do this thing where we'll be talking and when someone new joins wanting to know what we're talking about, one of us starts a story and the others immediately fall in line, like "of course we were discussing the moon cycles all this time." And we also do this with our parents to cover for each other. We all know to say yes when anyone of us asks the other a question in front of the parents.

All that to say, I love the dynamic you have going in between Jessica and your narrator.
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[personal profile] bleodswean 2024-07-08 01:32 pm (UTC)(link)
What a twist ending! You packed so much character into this story and it was both fun and thought-provoking! Well done!
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[personal profile] banana_galaxy 2024-07-08 03:06 pm (UTC)(link)
This was an engaging read. I didn't expect how it was going to turn out, but that was a solid ending.
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[personal profile] rayaso 2024-07-08 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
This was so much fun and so creative. I loved the outrageousness of the lies, especially re-scarring her scar because it was a keloid scar and thus stuck out from her face enough to catch on the fence. I also loved the way the scar reflects her moods. Very well done!
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[personal profile] swirlsofpurple 2024-07-08 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
An amusing story
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[personal profile] night_owl_9 2024-07-08 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Love this piece!
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[personal profile] mollywheezy 2024-07-09 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I love the acceptance and kindness your narrator showed to Jessica! :)
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[personal profile] alycewilson 2024-07-09 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Very sweet! it reminds me of the concept that you can pick on your own sibling, but if somebody else does, you rush in and protect them.
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[personal profile] gunwithoutmusic 2024-07-09 07:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, I really enjoyed this! I worked with someone like Jessica before; never could tell if she was telling the truth or not, but she was so charming that it didn't really matter. :) Good work this week!
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[personal profile] erulissedances 2024-07-09 09:46 pm (UTC)(link)
The interactions between these three was handled very well. I would love to see these lizards, though.

- Erulisse (one L)
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[personal profile] erulissedances 2024-07-11 09:24 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, how beautiful he is!

- Erulisse (one L)